Criticism 12th of may

CHANGES: One of the changes that I made to my animatic is the part where Eva lands a hit on Awarini I decided to completely remove this from the animatic and instead just have Eva get her a** handed to her instead to illustrate how powerful Awarini is. 

    A lot of the responses said that my choreography was good and the shots were diverse allowing for a clear story throughout the animation. Some of the criticism I received was related to the ending which people commented was abrupt which was correct, I forgot to extend the duration of the final frame so when it was exported it ended very abruptly with only a 1 second flash of the final frame, I plan on fixing this. Again another Criticism I received was with the length of the the shots some thought they were to slow in some places so I may need to adjust this in future, especially in the scenes with lots of dialogue.






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